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Ron,
You might want to soften up your opening statement to the addressee that run's a large corporation.... "It appears to me that somehow you have been influenced by either corporations, friends, organizations, or people who can benefit your well being in unconventional ways". Your first sentence has the reader of your letter saying "F-You" and then it hits the trash can!
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